Showing posts with label Excerpts from Violets Are Blue. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Excerpts from Violets Are Blue. Show all posts

25 March 2012

March Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

This is it — the final excerpt of Violets Are Blue. I have chosen one that I think will whet your interest quite a bit . . . enjoy!

I had been reading but ten minutes when I heard footsteps coming from the kitchen, and then Robert’s voice. 
“Mum!” he gasped. “There’s a big commotion down at the harbor! Something about the Titanic!”
My heart beat rapidly.
“Really?” Mum asked quizzically. “That’s strange. Now Vi, wait one minute—” 
But she was too late. I had already flown from the bedroom, through the kitchen, and out of the apartment door. My feet pounded down the stairs, my sides heaving. All I could think of was seeing Lilli.
The harbor had never seemed farther; my feet had never moved so slowly. The wind beat against me, holding me back. Despite the fact that it was April, the evening air was cool, but I paid no attention to the chilly breeze. I ran with lightning in my steps. People stared at me as I ran, but I moved right past them. 
Why were the roads so long tonight? Why couldn’t my feet move more rapidly? I couldn’t contain my excitement; this was the moment for which I had waited several months.
A large crowd had gathered around the harbor. I saw a ship docked, but it was somewhat smaller than the pictures of the Titanic Robert saved from the newspapers.
That’s odd, I thought.
But I was given no more time to speculate it. As people poured forth from this ship, I finally saw the name painted on the side: R.M.S. Carpathia.
How could that be? Was another ship to arrive; a ship of which I was not aware? Fear started to seep through my bones. What had happened to the Titanic?

09 March 2012

February Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

And *cough* I do *cough* know that it's not technically February anymore. 

Here's this month's excerpt! I hope y'all enjoy it — it's one of my father's favorite scenes. :)

“Well, I’d best go take the children out,” I said quickly. “Come Grace.” I took her hand, and nodded for Henry to follow me.
“Watch out for automobiles as you cross the street!” Mum said.
“We will,” I promised. 
The street was crowded with the noisy automobiles, and it was quite dangerous, for they could easily run over a young child. Henry was fascinated with them, thinking it a wonder that people could travel from place to place without a horse and buggy, but I thought the whole business of them was silly. I much preferred riding a horse. Automobiles were one of the few things that always would bother me about the city; among others being the noise and the smells and the crowds.
“Watch out!” I cried, yanking Henry back by the collar of his shirt, to keep him from being hit by an automobile. The angry driver honked his horn at us as he screeched past us and on down the street.
“Take better care, Henry,” I scolded him, when we were safely on the sidewalk once more. 
“I wanted to see it…” he whined. “You never let me see automobiles up close.”
“That’s because they’re dangerous!” I snapped back. “Mum instructed me to take care of you, and I have no wish to repeat the incident that occurred with Helen and the harbor.”
“Do you have to bring that up again?” Henry asked, rolling his eyes. “It’s getting a little old. Helen fell into the harbor almost three months ago.”
“I don’t care—that doesn’t mean I’m going to be careless again!” I turned around and started walking backwards, facing Henry so that I could see his face.
“Violet…” Henry started to say.
“Listen to me,” I said. “You need to learn that it’s not good to run into—” 
“People?” 
I turned around instantly, realizing that I had just run into Ethan. 
“Oh, I’m so sorry, Ethan,” I stuttered, blushing. “I was just talking to Henry here about the seriousness of running into the street.”
“Ah,” Ethan said, leaning back on his heels with his hands in his pockets. “But it seems that, while you are giving excellent instruction to your brother about why you shouldn’t run into the street, you saw no harm in running into me.”
“It was an accident,” I protested quickly. “And I feel very remorseful of it.” 
“I know, Violet—I really am not that bothered.” He grinned. “Though… it was quite funny.”
I rolled my eyes. “For you, perhaps!” I retorted. 
“Fair enough,” he said quickly. “Now, where were you going?”

27 January 2012

January Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

I hope y'all enjoy this month's excerpt!

The next time I awoke, it was evening. Dr. Baylor was leaning over me, listening to my heart. 
“Hmm…” he said. “Hmm, indeed… hmm…”
I wish he would say more then just “hmm.” It was beginning to bother me.
“Hmm…” he said once more. “Yes, Mrs. Bradshaw, you have done well. Rest is all she needs. By tomorrow morn, she shall be fit as a fiddle.”
“Thank you, sir,” Mum said gratefully.
“What exactly made you faint, miss?” The doctor’s gray eyes peered over his wiry spectacles and seemed to bore into me.
“I… I don’t know…” I said, struggling to remember. The images in my head were growing stronger, but they were still very faint. “I… I think I was overly-tired… from the factory.”
“Ah, yes.” He nodded his balding head. “Those factories are no good for people, especially the young ones.” He shook is head sadly, then looked sternly at Mum. “I would advise you to keep your daughter out of the factories, ma’am. Out for good. That heat can do mighty bad things to children. Fainting’s not the worst that could happen.”
Mum protested that she had no other choice; her children would starve.
“I know what you mean, ma’am,” Dr. Baylor said sympathetically. “Believe me, I do. But hear me out: that factory will do nothing but harm to your daughter. It’ll do harm to you, too.” 

24 December 2011

December Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

Just like last month, we -- the ladies of Unsinkable -- are featuring Christmas excerpts from Violets Are Blue in honor of the most wonderful time of the year. I hope y'all enjoy reading!

Our tree had a small pile of presents underneath it, at which we gazed with wonder and excitement in our eyes. Mum, now dressed, handed out several packages.
“There is one present for each,” she said. “I am sorry dears, but that is all we could afford.”
“Don’t worry about it, Mum,” Emma spoke up quickly. “Thank you.”
Grace was already eagerly tearing through the paper of her package. “Girls!” she shouted joyfully.
“Paper dolls,” Anna corrected. “Look Gracie, there’s one with curls just like you!”
“Ooh!” Grace’s face wore a huge grin. 
“A ship!” Robby’s eyes gleamed as he unwrapped the somewhat small model. “I’ll put it by my bed! Father, could we take it down to the wharf today?”
Father nodded.
“I can’t wait to see if it floats! Oh Father, a real ship! Just like the Titanic! I wonder how many people she could hold? I’m going to call her…”
“Oh, do be quiet, Robby,” Helen snapped. She was glumly staring down at something red in her hands. “You don’t need to prattle on so. You’re being rude.”
Robert shut his mouth with an audible click. Mum glanced towards Father, who slowly shook his head.
“Helen, what have you received?” Father asked, his voice sounding cheery.
“This,” she answered, motioning unenthusiastically towards the pair of red mittens in her lap. “Just mittens. Plain, uninteresting mittens.”
Anna nudged Helen with her elbow. 
“I got blue mittens!” Anna said in a cheerful voice. “Just what I needed—my other pair was worn thin. And in my favorite color, too! Thank you, Mum.”
Mum beamed at Anna, then turned to Grace, who was struggling with her paper dolls.
“I got a green scarf!” Henry said, with a big grin on his face. He proudly displayed it in his left hand.
I saw Anna out of the corner of my eye nudge Helen, who quickly nodded and then stood up.
“We have a gift for everyone,” she said grandly. “Bring them in, Helen!”

Merry Christmas Eve! :)

06 December 2011

November Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

Yes, I know it's technically not November anymore, but the November - December giveaway is still taking place, so this is the November excerpt of Violets Are Blue. The Christmas season is upon us, and both Bree and I thought we would reveal some more . . . Christmas-y excerpts of VAB. Both this month and next month, y'all will be treated to snippets from my book that take place during and around Christmas. Enjoy!

Anna turned to Helen with a quizzical look on her face.
“Now that you mention it…” she said. “I haven’t seen Emma all morning. Helen, have you?”
Helen shook her head, her long brunette braids shaking.
“No, I haven’t. But why do you need Emma, Vi?”
“I wanted to ask her a question about Christmas.”
“Christmas! Oh, I almost forgot! Is it really so close?” Helen’s eyes shone with excitement.
“Christmas is in only in one more week,” Anna counted on her fingers. “We don’t have much time to make a feast.”
“A feast! Will there really be a feast?” Helen and Anna both turned to me eagerly.
“Well, girls, that’s what I wanted to talk about with Emma.” I sat down on the floor next to them. “You see, we don’t have very much money for a feast… and…”
“No feast? But it’s Christmas—we have to have a feast!” Helen’s face looked sadly disappointed.
“It’s all right, Violet. We understand,” Anna said softly. “Don’t we, Helen?”
“Understand? But that’s not fair! It’s not Christmas without a ham! Can we not afford just a small one?” Helen looked very upset.
“I don’t know,” I sighed. “But I don’t think we should worry Mum and Father about it. If they see that we’re disappointed, it will make them feel really bad that they can’t afford a ham.”
“Yes,” Anna said. “I won’t say anything. I don’t want to hurt Mum or Father.”
Helen just frowned.
“Well, I’d best go see if I can find Emma,” I said, rising to my feet. “Don’t worry, Helen,” I reassured my sister. “We’ll make this Christmas special no matter what.”

28 October 2011

October Excerpt of Violets Are Blue


I'm afraid my darling sister and I have not been on this blog much as of late. :/ Life has been . . . busy. And as poor an excuse that may be, 'tis the truth. But, I do not mean for my negligence to be the topic of this post, especially when we have something far more interesting about which to speak. And that "something" just so happens to be this month's excerpt of Violets Are Blue!

“How much longer?” Lilli asked quietly. She didn’t have to say anything more—I knew what she meant.
“Mum said no more than two weeks. She wants us to leave as soon as possible.”
“And your father?” 
“He agrees with Mum.” 
Lilli sighed and flopped back on the bed. “That means we have only two more weeks together. Do you think you’ll ever come back to visit?”
“I don’t know… It’s an expensive journey, and not one that can be made often. I may never—”
“—see you again,” she interrupted, finishing my sentence sadly. 
“Will you write me?” I asked. 
“Every day!” she replied eagerly. 
“Really?” I asked skeptically, taking the pillowcase off of her pillow. “Every day?”
“Well, I’ll try, anyway. Will you write me?”
“Of course I will.” I threw the pillow at Lilli. “You know that.”
“You mustn’t leave out anything,” she insisted, catching the pillow. “I want to hear just what life is like in New York.”
“And I want to hear about everything that is going on here in Eastbourne,” I replied, “even if you say the same thing a dozen times.”

Any thoughts you'd care to share? And of course, if you have any critiques or critisms, feel free to speak your minds -- I won't be offended. :)

Love and blessings to all of you!

21 September 2011

September Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

It's my favorite time of the month: time to release yet another excerpt from Violets Are Blue! Enjoy, ladies, and please leave a comment if you have any suggestions on how I can improve. :)

Father informed all of us of the pending move at the breakfast table a few days later. The rest of the children seemed to take the news remarkably well. Robert, my nine year old brother, was especially excited because we would be crossing the ocean on a ship. He was eagerly questioning Father about the fine details of our voyage, as if completely ignorant of the fact that we were leaving the only home we’d ever known. 
Emma was the only one to show some sort of emotion that was not excited when Father made his announcement. Her eyes grew wide with shock and sorrow, and a hand flew to her throat. 
“Leaving?” she asked, her voice cracking. “We’re leaving Eastbourne?”
“Yes, dear,” Mum said, stroking her eldest daughter’s hand. “Your father and I don’t feel comfortable raising you children in such unreliable circumstances. We have never had disreputable characters come to the boarding house before, but after the incident on Tuesday…” Her voice trailed off.
Emma seemed to be holding back tears. Her voice was unsteady as she asked to be excused. Mum nodded her head, and I watched my sister leave the room.
At least she understands, I thought bitterly. No one else seemed to care. The rest of my siblings were actually excited about this move. Aren’t they sad to leave their friends at school? What about our church? I gulped. What about Lilli? 
I didn’t want to think about her at this moment, so I tried to speak cheerfully as I asked Mum, “When will we depart?”
“As soon as your father can arrange tickets for us on a ship that is leaving soon,” Mum said. “Two weeks, at most.”
Two weeks. The words were like chains. Just two more weeks of happiness.
How would I tell Lilli?

22 August 2011

August Excerpt of Violets Are Blue


This month's excerpt of VAB shows a little history behind Vi and Lilli's friendship, and it also gives a bit of a peek into their differing characteristics. I hope you enjoy. :)

   I could barely remember a time when I had not known Lilli: we had been friends nearly our whole lives. Mum and Mrs. Prescott were like sisters to each other, and Mr. Prescott could often be found discussing news and politics with Father. The Prescotts only had three children; besides Lilli, they had a son and another daughter. The latter was just seven years old; a very pretty and shy little girl with the same straight blonde hair and green eyes as her elder sister. Their son, Will, who was three years my senior, was a good friend of Emma’s. A very good friend... 

     But Lillian was my special friend. We were kindred spirits, and would be, I assumed, for the rest of our lives. To the outside world, we didn’t seem very alike. Lillian had medium-length, straight blonde hair that was always falling out of braids. Her eyes were a mix between grey and green, and nearly always happy. She was a joyful and carefree girl. Virtually nothing bothered her, and the little that did was soon resolved. I, on the other hand, had curly blonde hair that I kept in a bun most of the time. My eyes were a dark, deep blue with hints of grey—the color of the ocean before a storm. My personality was a strange mix—quiet and thoughtful, but with quick temper. I didn’t like to show my emotions, and was extremely private. 

Because of our differences, we fit each other perfectly. Lilli’s docile nature balanced out my fiery temper, and my thoughtful mind was the perfect match to her flighty spirit. We both enjoyed reading and devoured books rapidly. We shared a love for babies and little children—Lillian especially. She hoped to have many children when she was grown and married. We told each other everything; we could even finish each other’s sentences. We were so close—it didn’t even seem probable that something would happen to pull us apart.

20 July 2011

July Excerpt of "Violets Are Blue"

Methinks you all will like this month's excerpt. :)

“You’ll never guess what I…” I started to say as I opened the apartment door.
“Violet!” I heard Anna say in annoyance. “I just scrubbed the floor! Look where you’re going!”
“Oops! Sorry, Anna,” I apologized. 
“Where’s Mum?” Emma asked curiously, entering the room.
“She decided to stay an extra shift at the factory,” I answered. “She was hoping to make more money to bring home to Father.”
“All the better,” Emma said.
I turned towards her, confused. “Why did you say “all the better” like that?”
“We’re trying to get the fall cleaning done before Mum comes home,” she whispered. 
“It’ll be a grand surprise!” Anna said, joining in.
I sure hope it’s grand,” Helen commented sourly, coming through the door. She was heaving a heavy mattress outside to air. “Emma’s making me do all the hard work! It’s not fair.”
“Where are the boys?” I questioned Emma.
“They went to help Father with one of his carpentry jobs. He said he might put them to work.” She winked at me.
“Ah…” I said, understanding.
“Well, I don’t see how it’s right for them to leave us with all the work!” Helen complained.
“Oh Helen,” I said. “You shouldn’t whine like that.”
“I don’t care!” she said in a contrary tone. “If I want to whine, I will!”
Anna stopped the argument midway.
“Violet,” she said. “What’s that in your hand?”

30 June 2011

June Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

Hello all! I'm so sorry that we have been absent for a good bit of time--Bree and I were out of town with our family for a week, and the little time we had on the Internet while we were away was needed to answer the most pressing of e-mails, nothing else. But, we are back, and ready to continue this event. :)

And yes, oh yes, 'tis time for yet another excerpt of Violets Are Blue! I will give you fair warning, though--this one is somewhat sad.

“Violet, Emma, wake up.”
Mum’s voice roused me from my sleep. Opening my eyes sleepily, I yawned and looked around. Our room was still dark. It must be very early in the morning, I thought. Mum shook Emma one last time to wake her, then left to awaken the other children.
“Come, Vi,” Emma said sleepily, sitting up and stretching. “We mustn’t be late for the train.” She nudged me gently, then slipped out of bed to get dressed.
I yawned once more, savoring my last moments in my own bed. Mum had lit a single candle in our room, and I watched it flicker and dance. Our curtains had been drawn for the night, and remained drawn now, since we would not be returning to our home. Still, I knew behind the folds of cloth the sky was as dark as night. I had never been up this early before. There was a quiet stillness to the house—and, I sensed, to all of Eastbourne—that only occurred in the very early hours of the morning. I wanted to snuggle back down under my covers and sleep for several more hours, until I would be awoken naturally by the golden sunlight streaming through the curtains Mum always opened right before we woke. I wanted to wake to Emma singing as she dressed. I wanted to smell the delicious scent of pancakes frying as Mum made breakfast. I wanted everything to be normal, as it had always been every day of my life. But it wasn’t. I was waking to a dark morning—the morning I would leave my home for good—and I needed to get up quickly and get dressed, lest we miss the train that was to take all of us to Southampton. 
Finally, with a resigned sigh, I got out of bed. We had each laid out our clothes on the ends of our beds the night before, and now I reached for my plain grey skirt and white blouse. Already dressed, Emma was twisting her long dark hair into a simple bun. 
When I had finished dressing and braiding my hair, we slowly took the sheets off of our bed. I tried to make the task last as long as it could, for the longer it took, the longer until I had to leave. Emma took extra care folding the sheets, and I smoothed the quilt until nary a wrinkle could be found, but we could delay no longer. Already, Father was calling that it was time to leave. I glanced mournfully around the small room I had shared with my sister for as long as I could remember, Emma blew out the candle, and we left the room, closing the door behind us. 
The rest of the family was gathered in the sitting room, waiting for us. Helen opened her mouth to complain about how long Emma and I had been, but Father shushed her quickly. I handed the folded bedclothes to Mum without a word, and she quietly placed them in the last trunk, closing the lid over our belongings. 
A soft drizzle was falling outside as we all stepped into the waiting automobile that would take us to the train station. I paused before climbing in to look one last time at my dearly beloved home. 
“Come, Violet,” Father said gently. 
Reluctantly, I climbed into the automobile. Father was the last to get in, and he closed the door behind himself. Slowly, the car made its way down the streets, and our house disappeared from view in the rain.

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17 May 2011

May Excerpt of Violets Are Blue

Yes, I know it says "Bree," but this is really Elizabeth Rose. Blogger has been having some problems lately, and for some reason, it won't allow us to sign Bree out of her Blogger account. So, you'll just have to trust me on this. :)

A new month, a new giveaway, all this must mean (you guessed it!)... a new excerpt of Violets Are Blue!

I couldn’t fall asleep that night. Mum and Father were up late talking, and I tossed and turned, hearing the murmur of their voices in the background. My covers felt heavy, and I pushed them away; moments later, I was yanking the sheets back up to my chin, shivering. Was I sick? Placing a hand to my sweaty forehead, I tried to determine whether I had a fever. I didn’t feel any warmer than normal. My stomach churned with nervousness. What were Mum and Father talking about? And what on earth did Mum mean by “no stranger will be staying under my roof ever again”?
Finally, I gave up on trying to sleep. Slipping out of bed quietly so as to not awaken Emma, I tiptoed down the hall to my parents’ bedroom. I couldn’t hear voices anymore, only the sound of deep, even breathing that came through the door. They were asleep.
I raised my hand to knock on the bedroom door, but paused. I hated to awaken them. Instead, I made my way further down the hall to the staircase, and then down to the kitchen. Filling the tea kettle with water, I set it on the stove to boil. I felt like a cup of tea.
“Violet?” someone murmured from behind me. The voice was sleepy. 
I turned to see Mum standing in the doorway. 
“Why are you up, dear?” she asked.
“I couldn’t sleep.”
Mum was silent for a while. The only sound in the still room was the quiet bubbling of the boiling water. The pot began to steam. I took it off the stove and prepared the tea quietly.
“Violet…” Mum said softly. She stroked my cheek.
“What is it, Mum?” I asked curiously.  
“Vi, we’re going to America.”
“To-to America?” I gasped, not believing. “You mean—to visit?”
“No, dear,” she answered sadly. “To live.”
All the air in my body seemed to go out.

20 April 2011

April Excerpt of "Violets Are Blue"

Because the purpose of this event is twofold--to commemorate the Titanic AND to celebrate the completion and hopeful publication of my book--I think it is most important to include several excerpts of Violets Are Blue, to be posted on this blog throughout the course of the event. One every month, to be exact. :) Shall that suit you?

This first excerpt is one of my favorite parts in the book because it deals with Ethan and Vi's first meeting. Enjoy, and please let me know if you have any suggestions on how to improve it. :)

The next day I went to the butcher’s shop to buy some meat. To my surprise, the butcher, Mr. Peterson, was not there. In his place was a young man who looked to be about sixteen. I bought the meat and was turning to leave when the young man tapped my shoulder.
“You would be Miss Bradshaw, correct?” he asked.
I whirled quickly. “Sir, how do you know my name?”
“My uncle has told me all about you. He says you come every Wednesday to buy a pound of meat, normally whatever we have on sale. Is that true?”
“I don’t know why that would be any of your business, sir. And who might your uncle be?”
“I’m not ‘sir,’ I’m Ethan. And my uncle’s the butcher. Pleased to make your acquaintance, Miss Bradshaw.” He held out is hand in a friendly gesture.
I dropped a curtsy. “And I’m not ‘Miss Bradshaw’—I’m just Violet.”
He grinned, then gestured toward my basket. “Is that enough to feed your family? I was sure that there were nine of you.”
“We get along well enough,” I said stubbornly, blushing. 
“Now, I didn’t mean to offend you, Violet,” Ethan said quickly. “It just didn’t seem like much meat to be taking home to a large family.”
“It’s all we can afford,” I said softly. I curtsied once more, than left the shop.